Monday, April 9, 2007

i see red

i see anger
i see rage
i see bitterness
i see unhappiness
i see depression
i see loneliness
i see hurt
i see rejection
i see pain
i see hatred
i see jealousy
i see malice
i see vindictiveness
i see wickedness
i see cruelty
i see violence
i see brutality
i see you
i see me

5 comments:

Mocha said...

wow...why isnt there nothing in there about how beautiful you are? or how you see how funny you are?
or how you see how cute your nose is?
or how you see your smile is just that much gummier than everyone else's?
What I'm tyring to say is; there has to be something you see that is good when you see..you..
One thing?

Mocha said...

oh..I just read thru again for perspective and I see it now..
This wasnt introspection was it?
You're mad at someone..and this is your definition of the emotions, feelings and events that surround your relationship with this person..
I'm sorry..
I hope tho that this is a "past" thing and it does not persist?
I'm sorry it was so bad..

soul said...

who has you riled up!?
Who dares to intrude on your cool, calm demeanor?.

I never feel like I have to say anything on here, cos it feels like you know exactly how to handle yourself and if you don't you will eventually.

Let it out lady.... and breathe
The green eyed monster will continue to be some people's bosom buddy cos you ain't gonna stop being fabulous for nobody right?..

Dust your shoulders off baby... keep shinning.

luminousnubian said...

Mocha and Soul- thanks ladies, i was having a moment there! i was really really angry at someone,i hate wasting such emotion on certain persons,but you know how it is when you just cant hold it in anymore. feeling better now tho!! thanks for the concern! :)

IJEOMA said...

ok your comment makes the poem make better sense.. i was kind of confused by what you were trying to say